Perfection in the making

Firstly let me just say I really like the idea you are conveying. This goes about it in both a clever and creative way. Your shading is insanely good here. Your attention to detail is pretty intense. there is a lot going on. You have an excellent grasp on lighting and shading. it's amazing what can be done with a pencil really. This is laid out well and in a manner that keeps your eyes on the page. The textures are intense! I can't honestly say anything negative about this, and even if I did find something it would be petty in comparison.